Friday, March 28, 2008

You (poem 5)

The desire of your passionate side,
the anxiety of the emotions you express,


The reality right in your face, while the negativity
is beneath you,

You have the enthusiasm for your loved
one which is me, while the two of us are
talking,

With the intelligence in your mind,
your artistic ways are showing that you
are most definately you!!!

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

What poetic devices were you using? You were supposed to identify them and the lines for points.